Conrad Rice

Hi! I'm here to give you a quick review. :) First off, I question the use of a different language as the title when it isn't relevant to the poem. ...

Hi Lozz :) I'll be giving you a quick little review for today. First off, you might consider being a little less vague in the beginning of this story. I ...

Hi gyrfalcon! I'm returning the favor, like you asked of me. :) I've actually read over this story before. I didn't critique it because I really do not find anything ...

Hi lakegirls! Sorry it took me so long to get to this, didn't really have much reviewing time this weekend. But, I'm here now. :) I thought that this was ...

Hi druthie! I'm here to help you out with this. First, no all caps titles. They are painful to the eyes of potential reviewers, besides being against YWS policies, and ...

Hi Eliza! I'm here to give you a courtesy review since you entered this story in the CIA's contest. This story does have a rather quirky sense of being about ...

Hi Adna! I'm here to give you a courtesy review, because you entered this in the CIA's contest. :) I have to say that I suspected this might be about ...

Hi Gallagher! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm here to give you a courtesy review for entering this in CIA's contest. :) There seems to be some wasted potential with this ...

Hi Dudette. I'm Conrad Rice, one of the judges for the CIA contest, and I'm here to give you a courtesy review for entering the contest. I have to say ...

Well, Ky, I'm here to critique your last section. And what an end this was. I remember thinking, in the last section when the sheriff went outside after he got ...

Well, Kylan, this was very well done. I liked it all, especially the end of the first section. I think you should probably flip the part with the girl around ...

Hi Angel! :) I'm here to give your story a quick look over, okay? lye her reflection. That should be lay, not lye. That's pretty much the only nitpick I ...

Hi Ky, I'm here with part 10. Ugh. I hate you. I hate you a lot. You know why? You took a character that I had not known until this ...

Hi Ky! I'm here to take a look at the latest installment of this wonderful story. “Ed's got a brother Tulsa. We'll stay there until fall, maybe.” There should be ...

Hi Jiggs! I'm here to help you out and give your story a review. Well, I have to say that this story confused the heck out of me. The first ...